My two cents. :-)

I think that an explanation of the paleo diet could have been included - 
something along the lines of "the optimum diet for the human animal based on 
the nutritional requirements established during its evolutionary path to its 
present form (the modern homo sapiens). The period during which this process 
evolved began xx million years ago and ran to the end of the Paleolithic 
Era, some 10,000 years ago."  Something like that so that readers can 
understand the underlying thesis of the diet, and not just be told what and 
what not to eat.

The title is Paleo Diet but the first sentence of your page talks about 
"dietary lifestyle". Maybe it should be consistent?

Marilyn

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Don Wiss" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, January 31, 2010 6:46 PM
Subject: My new paleo diet definition page


>I have just finished writing: http://paleodiet.com/definition.htm
>
> Two things motivated me to write the page: (1) I did not want Cordain's 
> way to become the definition of the paleo diet. (2) I want to be sure that 
> dairy isn't considered paleo.
>
> Before linking to it, can I get some comments from you all?