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Re: Draft of my "Letter to the Editor" sent to Scientific American
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Bob Avery <[log in to unmask]>
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Date:
Tue, 19 Aug 2003 23:13:41 -0400
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Edward,

>Comments on the following draft (already sent; waiting for editor's
reply)
are welcome.

My take upon initial reading?  Too verbose and polemical to get
published, but good luck!  I estimate that you could have made the
salient points in about 1/4-1/3 of the space.  Editors love brevity.

Bob Avery

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