excuse my error for the preposition 'on', instead use "in."
"I was suspended in your poem....."
 
 
Sure, you are not Cherno Baba to be so concerned about prepositions. (Jokes!!!)
 
 
 
 
 
> Date: Fri, 26 Oct 2007 17:03:31 -0500> From: [log in to unmask]> Subject: Re: Forwarded: Forward My Poem "Suspense B4 Dawn" To Five Of Your Friends And Help Me Win An iPod!> To: [log in to unmask]> > Bro. Bambalaye,> > I just voted you a "10." I can secure you two other votes.> Congrats on your beautiful poem. > > I wish you luck. > > You are very articulate and poetic. I hope you keep contesting not only to win an ipod, but for liezure, and the spirit of sharing your poetic talents with us. Only then will you get my votes again. (smile!!)> > Keep the stanzas flowing. I was suspended on your poem for a minute, just like you were suspended in 'dawn.' It reminds me of the last echo during adzan [call to prayer], when the muazin [caller to prayer/success] says "salatul khairul minal nawm-meaning prayer is better than sleep." 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