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Ebrima Ceesay

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>To: "ebrima ceesay" <[log in to unmask]>
>Subject: the draft petition modifications
>Date: Tue, 2 Oct 2001 21:49:04 +0100
>
>Ebrima,
>
>Well, I am waiting to get to talk to you personally on the telephone this
>evening.  You've tried me twice and I've been engaged, and I've tried to
>get hold of you three times and you are engaged.  It's a bit like telephone
>hopskotch !!
>
>Anyway, vis-a-vis the petition from Katim Touray:  may I make the following
>amendments:
>
>1st Para:  not stellar - use notable or commendable.
>
>2nd Para:  say (line 2) - on the tragic deaths and injuries
>occasioned.........   Omit "tragic" from  'terrorist acts'.
>
>3rs Para:  instead of "in tragic way", say "tragically" or "sadly".
>
>4th Para:  say "to express our concerns about the current political
>atmosphere" - rather than "present".
>
>5th Para:  say instead:  " Since Jammeh came to power in a military coup in
>1994, he has instituted a government which has no regard for human rights,
>democracy and the rule of law".
>


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