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Okay, I'll proof recipes. Reasonable enough request.
I like the background annecdotes. They help me evaluate whether the
writer's experience and my own are similar enough for me to apply the
information.
Perhaps a format of facts in the first paragraph, and then annecdotes to
back up the facts in the second would facilitate skimming? Just an idea.
Elizabeth