It looks fine by me with one revision:

Please drop the "/New York" from _Preservation Industry Network/New
York_

PIN is more aligned with NYC, NJ, CT, DC, TX, Mississippi and Canada
than "New York" state. We had stopped using the "New York" prior to IPTW
ONE, but the need to be non-exclusive of our metropolitan diversity was
not as evident then to press the issue. As well, APT/NY is working to
reconstitute itself, primarily as an Upstate organization, and it would
help if we not have to many nasty slashes abounding along with cryptic
acronyms.

Thanks,
][<en