> > I actually did go back and edit it
> >  for clarity

but with writing
> on occasion we get to backtrack on the flow and edit, refine what we meant

Always wondered what would happen if readers read at the same pace a piece
was written, dwelling on each word like a lollipop of an idea before going
on to the
next.   cummings tried to illustrate it best.   What a rush we have become.
What great language used to go on to the page centuries ago.

cp in bc